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"10 Things I Hate About You" by ~DarkVendetta:iconDarkVendetta:



"10 Things I Hate About You"

I hate the way you've changed so much
I hate it when you glare.
I hate it when you talk too much,
You didn't have to share.

I hate the way you think you're all that
I hate it when you ignore me.
I hate the way you act like a brat
It just makes you look sorry.

I hate the way you've become much colder
I hate the way you think you're just fine.
I hate it when you say you're older,
When actually, you act like you're only nine.

But most of all, I hate that we met each other
All you've brought is pain and you fell for another.
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Based on the final poem in "Ten Things I Hate About You." Originally a school assignment given to me, but this poem actually meant something to me. Thought I'd share it.

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It's an interesting poem and I can tell there's a lot of story behind it. My one criticism is that the rhythm seems very askew. It's just not balanced and it takes away from the poem. But I do like it, other than that.
:icongirasols-reflection:
*poke*

Other than being an assignment, I'm curious to talk about it sometime. I've never been good at poetry, so I can't present any myself.
:iconcharmedsakura:
Nic. It does make me think of that poem from the movie but I think I like this one better. Good job.

--
Yeah, I miss you, too. A lot.
Doesn't change anything. Sorry.

JB <New Moon>

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